Tuesday, August 30, 2011

TOPICS: Essay #1

Choose one of the following topics for your first essay. Use MLA format; 3rd person (avoid 1st person and NO 2nd person). Identify characters BRIEFLY when you introduce them into your paper. Use the complete name of the characters initially, following by the last name as identification, if you like.

1.  Authority - what is the nature of authority in Salem? Who holds the authority and by what right? In what way is it external in some cases, in what way internal in others? Which is more authentic of genuine?

2.  The individual vs. society - case in point: John Proctor and other individuals who opposed the church and the court, individuals who defied the accusations of witchcraft. What happens to the society when an individual stands apart from its traditions, customs, and mores?

Rev. John Hale –
-- 3.  How he changes from Act I to the final scene

-- 4.  Compare & contrast Hale and Parris

5.  Underlying motives: Greed (Thomas Putnam); the girls who tried to save themselves from beatings; jealously (Abigail Williams' lust for Proctor; Ann Putman is jealous of the healthy children & g-children of R. Nurse)

 


 

Monday, August 29, 2011

Topics for Consideration Over THE CRUCIBLE

  • Discuss the role that grudges and personal rivalries play in the witch trial hysteria.
  • Discuss the role of authority in the drama; whose authority is "authentic"? What makes it authentic or genuine?
  • What is the role of the individual in a society which demands conformity and consistency? What threat does an individual pose to the society? 
  • How do the witch trials empower individuals who were previously powerless?
  • How does John Proctor's great dilemma change during the course of the play?
  • Why are Danforth, Hathorne, and the other authorities so resistant to believing the claim that Abigail and the other girls are lying?
  • What kind of government does Salem have? What role does it play in the action?
  • Analyze Reverend Parris. What are his motivations in supporting the witch trials?
  • Discuss the changes that Reverend Hale undergoes in the course of the play.
  • Examine the dynamics of Puritanism in 1692.
  • What social and religious factors are given to account for the harsh response to witchcraft?
  • Discuss Miller's treatment of women in The Crucible.
  • What is the function of Reverend Hale in the play?
  • Miller originally wrote The Crucible as a critique of McCarthyism, but he distanced his narrative by using the Salem witch trials as the setting for the play. Discuss the strengths and weaknesses of this approach.
  • At the end of the play, John Proctor recovers his sense of goodness by tearing up the confession that would have saved his life. Given his character and the events which have led up to this moment, do you find this act believable? Fully explain your response.
  • In The Crucible, Miller suggests that sacrifices may be necessary to restore the social order. Discuss the sacrifices made by the play's characters and whether you think they are necessary.
  • How does the title relate to the story?
  • In The Crucible Arthur Miller is making pointed comments about individuals and how we should operate in society'. Discuss with reference to the text.  
  • What is Giles Corey's role in the play?
  • How is Mary Warren used by both sides? Does she have an individual identity?

Monday, August 22, 2011

ENRICHMENT - Poetry Based on the Witch Hanging

Be sure to read the note to understand the source of the following poem; this is for enrichment only--but it is worth noting that literature can take for its subject  witchcraft in New England and authors may create drama, poetry, fiction (The Witch of Blackbird Pond), or essay ("We Are Not Superstitious")

Half-Hanged Mary  ~Margaret Atwood~

("Half-hanged Mary" was Mary Webster, who was accused of witchcraft in the 1680's in a Puritan town in Massachusetts and hanged from a tree - where, according to one of the several surviving accounts, she was left all night. It is known that when she was cut down she was still alive, since she lived for another fourteen years.)

7pm

Rumor was loose in the air
hunting for some neck to land on.
I was milking the cow,
the barn door open to the sunset.

I didn't feel the aimed word hit
and go in like a soft bullet.
I didn't feel the smashed flesh
closing over it like water
over a thrown stone.

I was hanged for living alone
for having blue eyes and a sunburned skin,
tattered skirts, few buttons,
a weedy farm in my own name,
and a surefire cure for warts;

Oh yes, and breasts,
and a sweet pear hidden in my body.
Whenever there's talk of demons
these come in handy.

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8pm

The rope was an improvisation.
With time they'd have thought of axes.

Up I go like a windfall in reverse,
a blackened apple stuck back onto the tree.

Trussed hands, rag in my mouth,
a flag raised to salute the moon,

old bone-faced goddess, old original,
who once took blood in return for food.

The men of the town stalk homeward,
excited by their show of hate,

their own evil turned inside out like a glove,
and me wearing it.

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9pm

The bonnets come to stare,
the dark skirts also,
the upturned faces in between,
mouths closed so tight they're lipless.
I can see down into their eyeholes
and nostrils. I can see their fear.

You were my friend, you too.
I cured your baby, Mrs.,
and flushed yours out of you,
Non-wife, to save your life.

Help me down? You don't dare.
I might rub off on you,
like soot or gossip. Birds
of a feather burn together,
though as a rule ravens are singular.

In a gathering like this one
the safe place is the background,
pretending you can't dance,
the safe stance pointing a finger.

I understand. You can't spare
anything, a hand, a piece of bread, a shawl
against the cold,
a good word. Lord
knows there isn't much
to go around. You need it all.

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10pm

Well God, now that I'm up here
with maybe some time to kill
away from the daily
fingerwork, legwork, work
at the hen level,
we can continue our quarrel,
the one about free will.

Is it my choice that I'm dangling
like a turkey's wattles from his
more than indifferent tree?
If Nature is Your alphabet,
what letter is this rope?

Does my twisting body spell out Grace?
I hurt, therefore I am.
Faith, Charity, and Hope
are three dead angels
falling like meteors or
burning owls across
the profound blank sky of Your face.

12 midnight

My throat is taut against the rope
choking off words and air;
I'm reduced to knotted muscle.
Blood bulges in my skull,
my clenched teeth hold it in;
I bite down on despair

Death sits on my shoulder like a crow
waiting for my squeezed beet
of a heart to burst
so he can eat my eyes

or like a judge
muttering about sluts and punishment
and licking his lips

or like a dark angel
insidious in his glossy feathers
whispering to me to be easy
on myself. To breathe out finally.
Trust me, he says, caressing
me. Why suffer?

A temptation, to sink down
into these definitions.
To become a martyr in reverse,
or food, or trash.

To give up my own words for myself,
my own refusals.
To give up knowing.
To give up pain.
To let go.

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2am

Out of my mouth is coming, at some
distance from me, a thin gnawing sound
which you could confuse with prayer except that
praying is not constrained.

Or is it, Lord?
Maybe it's more like being strangled
than I once though. Maybe it's
a gasp for air, prayer.
Did those men at Pentecost
want flames to shoot out of their heads?
Did they ask to be tossed
on the ground, gabbling like holy poultry,
eyeballs bulging?

As mine are, as mine are.
There is only one prayer; it is not
the knees in the clean nightgown
on the hooked rug
I want this, I want that.
Oh far beyond.
Call it Please. Call it Mercy.
Call it Not yet, not yet,
as Heaven threatens to explode
inwards in fire and shredded flesh, and the angels caw.

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3am

wind seethes in the leaves around
me the tree exude night
birds night birds yell inside
my ears like stabbed hearts my heart
stutters in my fluttering cloth
body I dangle with strength
going out of me the wind seethes
in my body tattering
the words I clench
my fists hold No
talisman or silver disc my lungs
flail as if drowning I call
on you as witness I did
no crime I was born I have borne I
bear I will be born this is
a crime I will not
acknowledge leaves and wind
hold onto me
I will not give in

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6am

Sun comes up, huge and blaring,
no longer a simile for God.
Wrong address. I've been out there.

Time is relative, let me tell you
I have lived a millennium.

I would like to say my hair turned white
overnight, but it didn't.
Instead it was my heart:
bleached out like meat in water.

Also, I'm about three inches taller.
This is what happens when you drift in space
listening to the gospel
of the red-hot stars.
Pinpoints of infinity riddle my brain,
a revelation of deafness.

At the end of my rope
I testify to silence.
Don't say I'm not grateful.

Most will have only one death.
I will have two.
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8am

When they came to harvest my corpse
(open your mouth, close your eyes)
cut my body from the rope,

surprise, surprise:
I was still alive.

Tough luck, folks,
I know the law:
you can't execute me twice
for the same thing. How nice.

I fell to the clover, breathed it in,
and bared my teeth at them
in a filthy grin.
You can imagine how that went over.

Now I only need to look
out at them through my sky-blue eyes.
They see their own ill will
staring them in the forehead
and turn tail

Before, I was not a witch.
But now I am one.

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Later

My body of skin waxes and wanes
around my true body,
a tender nimbus.
I skitter over the paths and fields
mumbling to myself like crazy,
mouth full of juicy adjectives
and purple berries.
The townsfolk dive headfirst into the bushes
to get out of my way.

My first death orbits my head,
an ambiguous nimbus,
medallion of my ordeal.
No one crosses that circle.

Having been hanged for something
I never said,
I can now say anything I can say.

Holiness gleams on my dirty fingers,
I eat flowers and dung,
two forms of the same thing, I eat mice
and give thanks, blasphemies
gleam and burst in my wake
like lovely bubbles.
I speak in tongues,
my audience is owls.

My audience is God,
because who the hell else could understand me?
Who else has been dead twice?

The words boil out of me,
coil after coil of sinuous possibility.
The cosmos unravels from my mouth,
all fullness, all vacancy.

Monday - August 22, 2011

Finish discussion of background to Arthur Miller's The Crucible -- so far, we've touched on:
  • Joseph McCarthy & the threat of Communism
  • Guilt by Association; Guilt by Accusation
  • Dramatic License
  • Theocracy
  • Setting
    • the forest as "the Devil's last preserve" (5)
  • Paradox
Today, focus will be on DIRECT and INDIRECT Characterization, student questions, & looking ahead to the quiz on Wednesday


Assignment Due 1st Day of Class, the Week of August 29th

Complete the following chart on direct and indirect characterization.  Rev. Samuel Parris is done for you, as an example. This should be completed after you have read the entire play, since examples of indirect characterization may be revealed in later acts. Include Act & scene of quotes. It does require the reader to re-visit the text, to look for details and examples; it is time consuming. However, if this is done well, this should help you in distinguishing characters and in learning the process of character analysis.  Not all the selections we read this semester will provide as clear direct characterization as this play does. Future reading selections base characters more on indirect characterization, which is, after all, what we use.

CHARACTER
DIRECT CharacterizationDIRECT QUOTE for this play, direct characterization is found preceding the introduction of each character
INDIRECT Characterization – actions that support direct characterization given by Miller
Accurate inference from both types of characterization
Rev. Samuel Parris
“middle 40s….cut a villainous path….very little good to be said for him….believed he was being persecuted…” (I, i)
Worried about his maintaining his position in the town; Proctor says he wanted silver candlesticks, pewter not good enough; Danforth calls him “brainless” when Abigail steals his money & runs away
Appears more greedy & selfish than a worried father or dutiful minister; good on the outside, but not inside—a hypocrite
Abigail Williams








Tituba








Mary Warren








John Proctor










Giles Corey








Thomas Putnam







Rebecca Nurse








Ann Putnam







Elizabeth Proctor








Rev. John Hale








Deputy Gov. Danforth










Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Notes on Setting & Character- The Crucible

Arthur Miller : not inspired by the witch trials at Salem, but by the Joseph McCarthy hearings in Washington, in 1953, during the Cold War--great focus on guilt by association and guilt by accusation, without evidence. From wikipedia:

McCarthy became the most visible public face of a period in which Cold War tensions fueled fears of widespread Communist subversion.[1] He was noted for making claims that there were large numbers of Communists and Soviet spies and sympathizers inside the United States federal government and elsewhere. Ultimately, McCarthy's tactics and his inability to substantiate his claims led him to be censured by the United States Senate.
The term McCarthyism, coined in 1950 in reference to McCarthy's practices, was soon applied to similar anti-communist activities. Today the term is used more generally in reference to demagogic, reckless, and unsubstantiated accusations, as well as public attacks on the character or patriotism of political opponents.[2]

[A note about wikipedia: while wikipedia is NOT a viable source for academic research, it will provide the student with brief explanations, definitions, and (perhaps most importantly) a list of Primary and Secondary sources and links for the student who wishes to begin serious research.]

Arthur Miller was not accused of Communist activities, but many of his friends in Hollywood were. He used the Salem witch trials as a parallel to what he believed was happening in Congress under the scrutiny of McCarthy and his like-minded colleagues.

*A Note on the Historical Accuracy of This Play -- immediately precedes Act One -- important term:
dramatic license: a liberty taken by a writer to produce a desired effect by deviating from conventional form, established rule, fact, or logic.

Notes over Literature – all examples come from The Crucible, except where noted
Setting: time & place – gives context to history, literature, one’s life
The Crucible: 1692, Salem, Massachusetts - Importance of setting is explained by Miller early in Act One, shortly after Rev. Samuel Parris is introduced -- it is extremely important in understanding these characters and this play; key terms:

Puritan - their attitudes & the development of a theocracy
Character(s) – in literature, those with whom an individual interacts; types:
·         Flat – one dimensional—often “fills the background”—example: Martha Cory
·         Round—fully developed, usually the primary characters—John Proctor
·         Static—remains the same in work— Abigail Williams; Samuel Parris
·         Dynamic—undergoes a transformation/change in attitude/development—Elizabeth Proctor; John Hale
·         Stereotype—a character so often portrayed that he/she is automatically “known” to the reader or the audience; what we consider “good” literature, like “good” films, will make limited use of stereotypes, while comedies (especially) off use stereotypes to create humor, as often seen in humorous horror movies that “play off” the idea of the mad scientist; some movies will take stereotypes and turn them on their head, such as the character of Jake in Sweet Home Alabama, who tells his (almost) ex-wife: “Just because I talk slow doesn’t mean I’m stupid.”
How to determine a personality or “character:”  DIRECT & INDIRECT characterization
Direct characterization refers to specific information an author chooses to give regarding an individual in a drama or story.  Example: when Abigail William is first introduced by Miller, she is referred to as:  “. . .a strikingly beautiful girl, an orphan, with an endless capacity for dissembling. Now she is all worry and apprehension and propriety.”   [NOTE:  The student is expected to look up all unfamiliar words and expected to know what they mean as they are used in context in the drama, novel, or poetry.] 
Indirect characterization refers to what the character says (or thinks, if provided by the author) or what he or she does OR what other characters’ say to or about the character.  Example:  In Act one of The Crucible, Abigail denies to her uncle, Rev. Parris, that she was a part of a group of girls who were caught dancing and “conjuring spirits” in the woods. However,  when he and the other adults leave the bedroom of the “afflicted” girl, and Abigail is left alone with her young cousin and the other girls, she drops the “innocent act” because the other girls KNOW what she has done:   
BETTY: You drank blood, Abby! You didn’t tell him that!
ABIGAIL:  Betty, you never say that again! You will never—
BETTY: You did, you did! You drank a charm to kill John Proctor’s wife . . . .
ABIGAIL, smashes her across the face: Shut it! Now shut it!             
The above dialogue, combined with the direct characterization given earlier in the scene,  provides the reader with a clear understanding that  Abigail is not the ingénue we might imagine when she first comes on stage  

Your first assignment will focus on direct and indirect characterization.   It will require you to look carefully at the major characters and note how each is presented. It requires that you focus on specific detail. When you later write your paper over the drama, it is hoped that the preliminary analysis you do at this stage will benefit you as you draft and finalize your critical essay over The Crucible.                                   

Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Assignments,Weight & Due Dates,

Assignment
Weight
Due Date
Quiz over The Crucible
05%
2nd day of class, week of August 22nd
Character Assignment over Indirect Characterization and Inference
05%
1st day of class, week of August 29
Critical Essay over Contemporary Themes in The Crucible
10%
2nd day of class, week of August 29
Quiz over Doubt – expect to distinguish between film and text
05%
1st day of class, week of September 12
Critical Essay over Doubt
10%
2nd day of class, week of September 19
Quiz over The Things They Carried
05%
1st day of class, week of October 10
Creative Logic Character Project Due
10%
1st day of class, week of October 17
Researched Essay over The Things They Carried
10%
1st day of class, week of October 26
Quiz over Poetic Devices
05%
2nd day of class, week of November 7
Oral Poetry Analysis Presentation, with Powerpoint
05%
During class for weeks of November 14 and 28
Class Participation—see accompanying rubric
10%
Rubric, with grade  to  students the week of November 28
Final Essay: over one of the poems discussed in class
20%
Refer to the Exam Schedule for date and time

Participation Rubric

Criteria
A – Exemplary

B - Proficient
C - Adequate
D - Insufficient




Attendance / Promptness
Student attends class regularly, uses no more than 2 absences during the semester & chooses those judiciously; he or she is usually prompt & professional.
Student attends class regularly, with no more than 3 carefully taken absences during the semester; he or she is usually prompt & professional and seldom tardy.
Student attends class regularly, for the most part, but has missed 4 classes, but not when work was scheduled in class; he or she is professional, but has been tardy on several occasions.
Student has missed more than 4 days, including days when work is scheduled in class.  In addition to poor attendance, the student has often been tardy and unprofessional.










Level Of Active Engagement In Class
Student proactively contributes to class by offering ideas, asking questions, presenting plenty of effective textual support for observations, eagerly & intelligently answers questions, and treats classmates and the professor respectfully
Student proactively contributes to class by frequently offering appropriate textual support for observations, answering questions frequently, and treating classmates and the professor respectfully.

Student occasionally offers textual support for observations, most of which is appropriate, answers questions every now and then,
demonstrates overall competence in comments or raising good questions in response to discussion,
but rarely actively or voluntarily contributes to discussion, and
treating classmates and the professor respectfully.

Student rarely contributes to class by offering ideas or asking questions. Primarily a non-participant in topics relevant to class discussion.











Listening Skills
Student listens when others talk, both in groups and in class. Student incorporates and builds off the ideas of others. Involves others in class discussion by asking questions, seeking others' responses, etc.

Student listens when others talk, both in groups and in class. Student incorporates and builds off the ideas of others
Student listens when others talk, both in groups and in class. Students responds to others in a thoughtful way but may not build on ideas or suggestions.
Student does not listen when others talk, both in groups and in class. Student often interrupts when others speak. Student fails to contribute to the learning environment
by blankly staring off into space or working on something else during class, talking with someone while
someone else is speaking, being off topic








Preparation
Student is almost always prepared for class with assignments and required class materials.
Student is usually prepared for class with assignments and required class materials.

Student is rarely prepared for class with assignments and required class
Student is almost never prepared for class with assignments and required materials.